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Comment: Couldn't tell they were a painter until almost the end of the article. This reads more like an obituary than an encyclopedic article. Is this a translation? Ktkvtsh(talk) 03:45, 7 February 2025 (UTC)
French Painter, Daughter of Marcel Duchamp
Yvonne Serre was born in Paris February 6, 1911.[1] Her mother Jeanne Serre, married to insurance broker Maurice Serre, became an artist's model for Marcel Duchamp in 1910. Maurice Serre died of tuberculosis before Yvonne turned 8 years old.[2] In 1918, Marcel Duchamp encountered Jeanne Serre by chance in the Paris Métro along with her daughter.[3] Jeanne Serre remarried in 1921 to a "bicycle dealer" named Henry Mayer.[4][5]
Encouraged by her mother, Yvonne became a painter and studied at the Grande Chaumière workshop in the 1930s.[6] During the war, her stepfather Henry Mayer was deported to a Nazi concentration camp.[7] Yvonne chose her artist name, Yo Sermayer, as a contraction of her two fathers' surnames.[8]
Yo settled on the rue Camille-Tahan near the Montmartre cemetery with her husband, Jacques Savy.[9][10] They were collectors of antique crystal paperweight balls, which were subsequently bequeathed to the Musée des Arts Décoratifs in Paris.[11]
In June 1966, with the help of his wife Teeny, Marcel Duchamp reconnected with Jeanne Serre at the Galerie Louis Carré, on the occasion of the exhibition of Duchamp's brother's sculpture: Le Cheval-Majeur.[12] This lead to the first meeting between the Duchamps and the Savys and their immediate friendship.[13] Beyond the physical similarities, Marcel and Yo share a sense of humor as well as a passion for "games of intellect and language".[14] Over the next two years, the couples visited each other often, "the two men [often] playing chess... the women discussing everything and nothing."[15] In 1967 Duchamp helped organize a New York exhibition of Yo's paintings at the Bodley Gallery.[16] Duchamp includes the following text in the catalog:
after: “Furniture Music” by Érik SATie
here: “Furniture Painting” by Yo SAVY (aka Sermayer)
Yo Savy alias Yo Sermayer's paintings were displayed in 1983 in a retrospective at the Kunsthalle in Bern.[19] Around the turn of the millennium, her work was shown again at the Museum of Modern and Contemporary Art in Geneva.[20][21]
By all accounts, she loved cigars and oysters, letter-writing, and sports.[22][23] To the rescue-workers who came to her aid after a statue fell on her, she reportedly said, "Thanks for coming, how much do I owe you?"[24] Although her eyesight declined and eventually failed, Yo continued to dine out at restaurants with her friends "almost daily... during the last years of her life."[25] She died on September 22, 2003 and was buried under the name Yvonne Savy-Meyer alongside her husband in the Charenton cemetery.[26][27]
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Grundbacher, François (2020) "Yo en toutes lettres" J'erre dans mon passé toujours plus proche
^Tomkins, Calvin (1996) Duchamp: a biography Henry Holt and Company, Inc.
^Grundbacher, François (2020) "Yo en toutes lettres" J'erre dans mon passé toujours plus proche
^Tomkins, Calvin (1996) Duchamp: a biography Henry Holt and Company, Inc.
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Grundbacher, François (2020) "Yo en toutes lettres" J'erre dans mon passé toujours plus proche
^Bellet, Harry "Yo Savy, la fille de Marcel Duchamp" Le Monde Publié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46, modifié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Tomkins, Calvin (1996) Duchamp: a biography Henry Holt and Company, Inc.
^Tomkins, Calvin (1996) Duchamp: a biography Henry Holt and Company, Inc.
^Grundbacher, François (2020) "Yo en toutes lettres" J'erre dans mon passé toujours plus proche
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Tomkins, Calvin (1996) Duchamp: a biography Henry Holt and Company, Inc.
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Grundbacher, François (2020) "Yo en toutes lettres" J'erre dans mon passé toujours plus proche
^"Yo Sermayer, Kunsthalle Bern, 22 januar - 27 februar 1983" Académie de Muséology Evocatoire, Le Ver à Val, 76190 Yvetot et Kunsthalle Bern
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Grundbacher, François (2020) "Yo en toutes lettres" J'erre dans mon passé toujours plus proche
^Bellet, Harry "Yo Savy, la fille de Marcel Duchamp" Le Monde Publié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46, modifié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Bellet, Harry "Yo Savy, la fille de Marcel Duchamp" Le Monde Publié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46, modifié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
^Bellet, Harry "Yo Savy, la fille de Marcel Duchamp" Le Monde Publié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46, modifié le 29 septembre 2003 à 12h46
^Grundbacher, François (2003) "Yo Savy, alias Yo Sermayer (1911 - 2003): la fille de Marcel Duchamp"Étant donné Marcel Duchamp #5Association pour l'Étude de Marcel Duchamp
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