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1. Most importantly, the content is too thin. Please see WP:SIZE and WP:STUB for guidelines concerning this. Please attempt to flesh-out the article; if you cannot do so, this may not be long enough for an 'encyclopedia.'
2. You first two sources (this and this) are decent. However, the remaining two -- this and this may not be considered RSs. They may be okay if additional, quality sources are added. At a glance, I located this, this, and this (page 149).
3. Please reconsider the title, given the size of the James Thomson disambiguation page. Please consider "James Thomson (surgeon)" or similar. See the article title policy for further information. MWFwiki (talk) 02:08, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
DR James Thomson | |
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| Born | 8 March 1823 Cromarty, Scotland |
| Died | 5 October 1854 Balaclava |
James Thomson (8 March 1823-5 October 1854) was an Assistant-Surgeon with the 44th (East Essex) Regiment Of Foot. He is best known for treating Russian Soldiers in The Battle Of The Alma in the Crimean War.